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General Essay Writing Tips
Despite the fact that, as Shakespeare said, "the pen is mightier than the sword," the pen itself is not enough to
make an effective writer. In fact, though we may all like to think of ourselves as the next Shakespeare, inspiration
alone is not the key to effective essay writing. You see, the conventions of English essays are more formulaic than
you might think – and, in many ways, it can be as simple as counting to five.
The Five Paragraph Essay
Though more advanced academic papers are a category all their own, the basic high school or college essay has the
following standardized, five paragraph structure:
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Paragraph 2: Body 1
Paragraph 3: Body 2
Paragraph 4: Body 3
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
Though it may seem formulaic – and, well, it is - the idea behind this structure is to make it easier for the reader
to navigate the ideas put forth in an essay. You see, if your essay has the same structure as every other one, any
reader should be able to quickly and easily find the information most relevant to them.
The Introduction
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The principle purpose of the introduction is to present your position (this is also known as the "thesis" or
"argument") on the issue at hand but effective introductory paragraphs are so much more than that. Before you even
get to this thesis statement, for example, the essay should begin with a "hook" that grabs the reader’s attention
and makes them want to read on. Examples of effective hooks include relevant quotations ("no man is an island") or
surprising statistics ("three out of four doctors report that…").
Only then, with the reader’s attention "hooked," should you move on to the thesis.
The thesis should be a clear, one-sentence explanation of your position that
leaves no doubt in the reader’s mind about which side you are on from the beginning of your essay.
Following the
thesis, you should provide a mini-outline which previews the examples you will use to support your thesis in the
rest of the essay. Not only does this tell the reader what to expect in the paragraphs to come but it also gives
them a clearer understanding of what the essay is about.
Finally, designing the last sentence in this way has the
added benefit of seamlessly moving the reader to the first paragraph of the body of the paper. In this way we can
see that the basic introduction does not need to be much more than three or four sentences in length. If yours is
much longer you might want to consider editing it down a bit!
Here, by way of example, is an introductory paragraph to an essay in response to the following question:
"Do we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes or from our successful actions?"
"No man is an island" and, as such, he is constantly shaped and influenced by his experiences. People learn by doing
and, accordingly, learn considerably more from their mistakes than their success. For proof of this, consider
examples from both science and everyday experience.
DO - Pay Attention to Your Introductory Paragraph
Because this is the first paragraph of your essay it is your
opportunity to give the reader the best first impression possible. The
introductory paragraph not only gives the reader an idea of what you
will talk about but also shows them how you will talk about it. Put a
disproportionate amount of effort into this – more than the 20% a simple
calculation would suggest – and you will be rewarded accordingly.
DO NOT - Use Passive Voice or I/My
Active voice, wherein the subjects direct actions rather
than let the actions "happen to" them – "he scored a 97%" instead of "he
was given a 97%" – is a much more powerful and attention-grabbing way
to write. At the same time, unless it is a personal narrative, avoid
personal pronouns like I, My, or Me. Try instead to be more general and
you will have your reader hooked.
The Body Paragraphs
The middle paragraphs of the essay are collectively known as the body paragraphs and, as alluded to above, the main
purpose of a body paragraph is to spell out in detail the examples that support your thesis.
For the first body paragraph you should use your strongest argument
or most significant example unless some other more obvious
beginning point (as in the case of chronological explanations) is
required. The first sentence of this paragraph
should be the topic sentence of the paragraph that directly relates
to the examples listed in the mini-outline of
introductory paragraph.
A one sentence body paragraph that simply cites the example of "George Washington" or
"LeBron James" is not enough, however. No, following this an effective essay will follow up on this topic sentence
by explaining to the reader, in detail, who or what an example is and, more importantly, why that example is
relevant.
Even the most famous examples need context. For example, George Washington’s life was extremely complex –
by using him as an example, do you intend to refer to his honesty, bravery, or maybe even his wooden teeth? The
reader needs to know this and it is your job as the writer to paint the appropriate picture for them. To do this, it
is a good idea to provide the reader with five or six relevant facts about the life (in general) or event (in
particular) you believe most clearly illustrates your point.
Having done that,
you then need to explain exactly why
this example proves your thesis. The importance of this step cannot be understated (although it clearly can be
underlined); this is, after all, the whole reason you are providing the example in the first place.
Seal the deal by
directly stating why this example is relevant.
Here is an example of a body paragraph to continue the essay begun above:
Take, by way of example, Thomas Edison. The famed American inventor rose to prominence in the late 19th century
because of his successes, yes, but even he felt that these successes were the result of his many failures. He did
not succeed in his work on one of his most famous inventions, the lightbulb, on his first try nor even on his
hundred and first try. In fact, it took him more than 1,000 attempts to make the first incandescent bulb but, along
the way, he learned quite a deal. As he himself said, "I did not fail a thousand times but instead succeeded in
finding a thousand ways it would not work." Thus Edison demonstrated both in thought and action how instructive
mistakes can be.
DO: Tie Things Together
The first sentence – the topic sentence - of your body paragraphs needs to have a lot individual pieces to be truly
effective. Not only should it open with a transition that signals the change from one idea to the next but also it
should (ideally) also have a common thread which ties all of the body paragraphs together. For example, if you used
"first" in the first body paragraph then you should used "secondly" in the second or "on the one hand" and "on the
other hand" accordingly.
DO NOT: Be Too General
Examples should be relevant to the thesis and so should the explanatory details you provide for them. It can be hard
to summarize the full richness of a given example in just a few lines so make them count. If you are trying to
explain why George Washington is a great example of a strong leader, for instance, his childhood adventure with the
cherry tree (though interesting in another essay) should probably be skipped over.
A Word on Transitions
You may have noticed that, though the above paragraph aligns pretty closely with the provided outline, there is one
large exception: the first few words. These words are example of a transitional phrase – others include
"furthermore," "moreover," but also "by contrast" and "on the other hand" – and are the hallmark of good writing.
Transitional phrases are useful for showing the reader where one section ends and another begins. It may be helpful
to see them as the written equivalent of the kinds of spoken cues used in formal speeches that signal the end of one
set of ideas and the beginning of another. In essence, they lead the reader from one section of the paragraph of
another.
To further illustrate this, consider the second body paragraph of our example essay:
In a similar way, we are all like Edison in our own way. Whenever we learn a new skill - be it riding a bike,
driving a car, or cooking a cake - we learn from our mistakes. Few, if any, are ready to go from training wheels to
a marathon in a single day but these early experiences (these so-called mistakes) can help us improve our
performance over time. You cannot make a cake without breaking a few eggs and, likewise, we learn by doing and doing
inevitably means making mistakes.
Hopefully this example not only provides another example of an effective body paragraph but also illustrates how
transitional phrases can be used to distinguish between them.
The Conclusion
Although the conclusion paragraph comes at the end of your essay it should not be seen as an afterthought. As the
final paragraph is represents your last chance to make your case and, as such, should follow an extremely rigid
format.
One way to think of the conclusion is, paradoxically, as a second introduction because it does in fact
contain many of the same features. While it does not need to be too long – four well-crafted sentence should be
enough – it can make or break and essay.
Effective conclusions open with a concluding transition ("in conclusion,"
"in the end," etc.) and an allusion to the "hook" used in the introductory paragraph. After that you should
immediately provide a restatement of your thesis statement.
This should be the fourth or fifth time you have
repeated your thesis so while you should use a variety of word choice in the body paragraphs it is a acceptable idea
to use some (but not all) of the original language you used in the introduction. This echoing effect not only
reinforces your argument but also ties it nicely to the second key element of the conclusion: a brief (two or three
words is enough) review of the three main points from the body of the paper.
Having done all of that, the final
element – and final sentence in your essay – should be a "global statement" or "call to action" that gives the
reader signals that the discussion has come to an end.
In the end, then, one thing is clear: mistakes do far more to help us learn and improve than successes. As examples
from both science and everyday experience can attest, if we treat each mistake not as a misstep but as a learning
experience the possibilities for self-improvement are limitless.
DO: Be Powerful
The conclusion paragraph can be a difficult paragraph to write effectively but, as it is your last chance to
convince or otherwise impress the reader, it is worth investing some time in. Take this opportunity to restate your
thesis with confidence; if you present your argument as "obvious" then the reader might just do the same.
DO NOT: Copy the First Paragraph
Although you can reuse the same key words in the conclusion as you did in the introduction, try not to copy whole
phrases word for word. Instead, try to use this last paragraph to really show your skills as a writer by being as
artful in your rephrasing as possible.
Taken together, then, the overall structure of a five paragraph essay should look something like this:
Introduction Paragraph
- An attention-grabbing "hook"
- A thesis statement
- A preview of the three subtopics you will discuss in the body paragraphs.
First Body Paragraph
- Topic sentence which states the first subtopic and opens with a transition
- Supporting details or examples
- An explanation of how this example proves your thesis
Second Body Paragraph
- Topic sentence which states the second subtopic and opens with a transition
- Supporting details or examples
- An explanation of how this example proves your thesis
Third Body Paragraph
- Topic sentence which states the third subtopic and opens with a transition
- Supporting details or examples
- An explanation of how this example proves your thesis
Concluding Paragraph
- Concluding Transition, Reverse "hook," and restatement of thesis.
- Rephrasing main topic and subtopics.
- Global statement or call to action.
More tips to make your essay shine
Planning Pays
Although it may seem like a waste of time – especially during
exams where time is tight – it is almost always better to brainstorm a bit
before beginning your essay. This should enable you to find the best supporting ideas – rather than simply the first
ones that come to mind – and position them in your essay accordingly.
Your best supporting idea – the one that most
strongly makes your case and, simultaneously, about which you have the most knowledge – should go first. Even the
best-written essays can fail because of ineffectively placed arguments.
Aim for Variety
Sentences and vocabulary of varying complexity are one of the hallmarks of effective writing. When you are writing,
try to avoid using the same words and phrases over and over again. You don’t have to be a walking thesaurus but a
little variance can make the same idea sparkle.
If you are asked about "money," you could try "wealth" or "riches."
At the same time, avoid beginning sentences the dull pattern of "subject + verb + direct object." Although examples
of this are harder to give, consider our writing throughout this article as one big example of sentence structure
variety.
Practice! Practice! Practice!
In the end, though, remember that good writing does not happen by accident. Although we have endeavored to explain
everything that goes into effective essay writing in as clear and concise a way as possible, it is much easier in
theory than it is in practice.
As a result, we recommend that you practice writing sample essays on various topics.
Even if they are not masterpieces at first, a bit of regular practice will soon change that – and make you better
prepared when it comes to the real thing.
Now that you’ve learned how to write an effective essay, check out our Sample Essays so you can see how they are done in practice.
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McDonald's serves classic fast food cookies in packs of
three. They were warm but not fresh out of the oven, and they had the
perfect blend of crunch and chewiness. The chocolate was nothing
revolutionary, although the overall taste and texture was exactly what
we wanted from a cookie. These cookies also had the fewest calories of
the group, at 170 calories per cookie and only 15 grams of sugar.![chick fil a cookie.JPG]({"default":{"load":"default","w":"73","h":"55","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqF4sv.img?h=546&w=728&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size3column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqF4sv.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size2column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqF4sv.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"}})
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Chick-fil-A's cookie was the most unique of the group
that we tested. It was more of a chocolate chip oatmeal cookie, and it
was thicker and denser than the other competitors. At 350 calories, it
was also one of the more caloric cookies of the bunch, but it was also
the most complex and tasted almost homemade. This cookie was $1.62,
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Aside from $5 foot longs, Subway is also pretty
well-known for its chocolate chip cookies. We always hear people raving
about them, so this was the one we were most excited to try. This cookie
was also the cheapest of the five at just $0.76.![starbucks cookie.JPG]({"default":{"load":"default","w":"73","h":"55","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFgZM.img?h=546&w=728&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size3column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFgZM.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size2column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFgZM.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"}})
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We loved the giant semi-sweet chocolate chunks in
Starbucks' take on the chocolate chip cookie. This cookie tasted like it
came from an actual bakery. It was chewy enough to almost fall apart
when we picked it up, but substantial enough to be satisfying.![Panera cookie.JPG]({"default":{"load":"default","w":"73","h":"55","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFes5.img?h=546&w=728&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size3column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFes5.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size2column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"47","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AAqFes5.img?h=468&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"}})
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Panera's Chocolate Chipper cookie is massive. Plus, it's filled with semi-sweet chocolate chunks and milk
chocolate flakes. It came warm and had a freshly-baked taste, which we
appreciated. Despite its impressive size, we were still a little put off
by the price of $2.79, considering how much cheaper the other delicious
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McDonald's cookies reigned supreme because they had the
perfect combination of crunch and chewiness, and just the right amount
of chocolate. Plus, $1.73 is a pretty good deal for three cookies.![18 Best and Worst Chocolate Chip Cookies: <p>By Christina Stiehl</p><p>Nothing goes better with a cold glass of milk than a soft (or crunchy!) chocolate chip cookie. But when it comes to your grocery store favorites, not all cookies are created equal.</p><p>Underneath the bright packaging and enticing photos, some packaged cookies are like a minefield of sugar, inflammatory sweeteners, and trans fats. Just one look at some of these ingredients is enough to make you swear off grocery store cookies for good.</p><p>But it’s not all bad news; there are some food companies who are getting it right, sticking to simple ingredients and keeping the calorie and sugar content in an acceptable range. If you get a hankering for chocolate chip cookies, make sure you pick up one of our Eat This-approved brands — and steer clear from the ones on the Not That! list. Love cookies beyond just chocolate chip? Be sure to check out our <a href="http://www.eatthis.com/most-popular-cookies-in-america-ranked">36 Most Most Popular Cookies in America — Ranked!</a></p>]({"default":{"load":"default","w":"73","h":"53","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AApfzd9.img?h=534&w=728&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size3column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"46","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AApfzd9.img?h=458&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"},"size2column":{"load":"default","w":"62","h":"46","src":"//img-s-msn-com.akamaized.net/tenant/amp/entityid/AApfzd9.img?h=458&w=624&m=6&q=60&o=f&l=f"}})
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